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open_sauces_errata [2010-02-16 09:45] – created 83.101.52.38open_sauces_errata [2010-04-26 23:29] 203.26.122.12
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-=== draft #1 -> #14+=== open sauces tasks/errata/miscellanea=== 
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 +items marked as <del>deleted</del> have been done. 
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 +=== draft #1 -> #14 === 
 +  * compressed into draft #16 
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 +=== draft #18 (aka open_sauces.draft.20100413.pdf) === 
 +  * <del>pp 61. Remove subhead 'Notes' and set as notes for consistency with other articles (eg. pp41, pp86-87)</del> 
 +  * <del>pp 55. include author name beneath title.</del> 
 + 
 +=== still waiting... === 
 +  * check all logos 
 +  * check E numbers 
 +  * check chemical notation 
 +  * check footnotes 
 +  * check IPA for 'stump' and/or 'stampot' 
 +  * check capitalisation & italic of 'Miel beton' 
 +    * i think i checked this, so it should simply be as indicated in the final plain text versions.  --- //[[alkan.chipperfield@gmail.com|Alkan Chipperfield]] 2010/04/14 02:50// 
 +  * map for feral trade coffee -> double gold recipe 
 +  * check chinese in ginger soup recipe 
 +    * well, as i mentioned by email a while ago, there is nothing in the characters that suggests they //aren't// what they're meant to be…  --- //[[alkan.chipperfield@gmail.com|Alkan Chipperfield]] 2010/04/14 02:50// 
 +  * check urls for accurcy & consistency 
 +  * check footnote consistency 
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 +=== draft #25 (aka open_sauces.draft.20100422.pdf) === 
 +  * changes to ingredients layout. check that amounts and names are consistent with earlier versions 
 +  * pp76. recipe layout/formatting 
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 +=== draft #26 (aka open_sauces_draft.20100425.pdf) === 
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 +  * pp 12-13. taste of brussels. if possible this page should look a bit archaic, with images from old herbaria and/or beer ads (see email for examples) 
 +  * pp 18-19. frills on parentheses very good on this page. background on this page could be a bit dusty (dukkah dust) 
 +  * pp 49. change amounts in recipe to relative amounts in Stuffed Gol Gappa Balls (see email) 
 +  * <del>pp 60-61. Femke didn't want any images with her text. The drawing should go with the recipe on the next page anyway.</del> 
 +  * <del>pp 60-61. needs page number</del> 
 +  * pp 92-93. little fires: beautiful, but is it still readable? -- still "needs work"
  
-=== draft #16 (aka open_sauces.draft.20100216.pdf) === 
  
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