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open_sauces_errata [2010-04-13 18:13] – nik | open_sauces_errata [2010-04-22 13:24] – 83.101.52.159 | ||
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* check IPA for ' | * check IPA for ' | ||
* check capitalisation & italic of 'Miel beton' | * check capitalisation & italic of 'Miel beton' | ||
+ | * i think i checked this, so it should simply be as indicated in the final plain text versions. | ||
* map for feral trade coffee -> double gold recipe | * map for feral trade coffee -> double gold recipe | ||
* check chinese in ginger soup recipe | * check chinese in ginger soup recipe | ||
+ | * well, as i mentioned by email a while ago, there is nothing in the characters that suggests they // | ||
* check urls for accurcy & consistency | * check urls for accurcy & consistency | ||
* check footnote consistency | * check footnote consistency | ||
+ | === misc === | ||
+ | poking my nose where it shouldn' | ||
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+ | * i like the green chevrons, but i wonder if they work with the existing devices and designs | ||
+ | * speaking of this, something has bothered me a little about the stylised braces. perhaps they seem somewhat too imposing. i don't know how it would work, but i wonder if reducing their opacity would be an option… or changing their colour? | ||
+ | * because the the graphic behind the sourcing paragraph on (pdf) page 9 is not aligned to the text, on first glance it looked to me like the text was meant to be highlighted | ||
+ | * speaking of chevrons: even though in bernard' | ||
+ | * speaking of braces, the one on (pdf) page 22 overlaps the text in an unseemly fashion! | ||
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+ | === draft #25 (aka open_sauces.draft.20100422.pdf) === | ||
+ | * changes to ingredients layout. check that amounts and names are consistent with earlier versions | ||