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--- open_sauces_errata [2010-04-14 01:22] – alkan
+++ open_sauces_errata [2010-04-26 15:45] – 83.101.33.239
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   * speaking of chevrons: even though in bernard's article they are 'references' and not 'links', they are serving the same function so why not put the little blue chevrons next to them like everywhere else?
   * speaking of braces, the one on (pdf) page 22 overlaps the text in an unseemly fashion!
+=== draft #25 (aka open_sauces.draft.20100422.pdf) ===
+  * changes to ingredients layout. check that amounts and names are consistent with earlier versions
+  * pp76. recipe layout/formatting
+=== draft #26 (aka open_sauces_draft.20100425.pdf) ===
+  * p7 - taste of brussels. if possible this page should look a bit archaic, with images from old herbaria and/or beer ads (see email for examples)
+  * p10 - frills on parentheses very good on this page. background on this page could be a bit dusty (dukkah dust)
+  * p25 change amounts in recipe to relative amounts in Stuffed Gol Gappa Balls (see email)
+  * p31: Femke didn't want any images with her text. The drawing should go with the recipe on the next page anyway.
+  * p47: little fires: beautiful, but is it still readable?