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* check footnote consistency | * check footnote consistency | ||
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- | poking my nose where it shouldn' | ||
- | | + | === draft #25 (aka open_sauces.draft.20100422.pdf) === |
- | * speaking | + | |
- | * because | + | * pp76. recipe layout/ |
- | * speaking of chevrons: even though in bernard' | + | |
- | * speaking | + | |
+ | === draft #26 (aka open_sauces_draft.20100425.pdf) === | ||
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+ | * pp 12-13. taste of brussels. if possible | ||
+ | * pp 18-19. frills on parentheses very good on this page. background on this page could be a bit dusty (dukkah dust) | ||
+ | * pp 49. change amounts in recipe to relative amounts in Stuffed Gol Gappa Balls (see email) | ||
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+ | * pp 92-93. little fires: beautiful, but is it still readable? -- still "needs work" | ||
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+ | * p 83 change " | ||
+ | * p 87 footnote indicators in text **//come after all other punctuation.// | ||
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+ | * pp 81-3 the bolded "why" repeated in each section here looks a bit weird to me. | ||
+ | * why is only one side of the spreads numbered? | ||
+ | * i like the idea of the formatting of the ingredients sections, but somehow |