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* changes to ingredients layout. check that amounts and names are consistent with earlier versions | * changes to ingredients layout. check that amounts and names are consistent with earlier versions | ||
* pp76. recipe layout/ | * pp76. recipe layout/ | ||
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+ | === draft #26 (aka open_sauces_draft.20100425.pdf) === | ||
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+ | * p7 - taste of brussels. if possible this page should look a bit archaic, with images from old herbaria and/or beer ads (see email for examples) | ||
+ | * p10 - frills on parentheses very good on this page. background on this page could be a bit dusty (dukkah dust) | ||
+ | * p25 change amounts in recipe to relative amounts in Stuffed Gol Gappa Balls (see email) | ||
+ | * p31: Femke didn't want any images with her text. The drawing should go with the recipe on the next page anyway. | ||
+ | * p47: little fires: beautiful, but is it still readable? | ||
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