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- | === open sauces tasks/ | + | ==== open sauces tasks/ |
- | items marked as < | ||
- | === draft #1 -> #14 === | + | ==== errata for first edition ==== |
- | * compressed into draft #16 | + | * page 89 "15ml tablesppons of ginger" |
- | === draft #18 (aka open_sauces.draft.20100413.pdf) === | ||
- | * < | ||
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- | === still waiting... === | ||
- | * check all logos | ||
- | * check E numbers | ||
- | * check chemical notation | ||
- | * check footnotes | ||
- | * check IPA for ' | ||
- | * check capitalisation & italic of 'Miel beton' | ||
- | * i think i checked this, so it should simply be as indicated in the final plain text versions. | ||
- | * map for feral trade coffee -> double gold recipe | ||
- | * check chinese in ginger soup recipe | ||
- | * well, as i mentioned by email a while ago, there is nothing in the characters that suggests they // | ||
- | * check urls for accurcy & consistency | ||
- | * check footnote consistency | ||
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- | === misc === | ||
- | poking my nose where it shouldn' | ||
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- | * i like the green chevrons, but i wonder if they work with the existing devices and designs | ||
- | * speaking of this, something has bothered me a little about the stylised braces. perhaps they seem somewhat too imposing. i don't know how it would work, but i wonder if reducing their opacity would be an option… or changing their colour? | ||
- | * because the the graphic behind the sourcing paragraph on (pdf) page 9 is not aligned to the text, on first glance it looked to me like the text was meant to be highlighted | ||
- | * speaking of chevrons: even though in bernard' | ||
- | * speaking of braces, the one on (pdf) page 22 overlaps the text in an unseemly fashion! | ||
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- | === draft #25 (aka open_sauces.draft.20100422.pdf) === | ||
- | * changes to ingredients layout. check that amounts and names are consistent with earlier versions | ||
- | * pp76. recipe layout/ | ||