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| === draft #26 (aka open_sauces_draft.20100425.pdf) === | === draft #26 (aka open_sauces_draft.20100425.pdf) === | ||
| - | * pp7. taste of brussels. if possible this page should look a bit archaic, with images from old herbaria and/or beer ads (see email for examples) | + | * pp 12-13. taste of brussels. if possible this page should look a bit archaic, with images from old herbaria and/or beer ads (see email for examples) |
| - | * pp10. frills on parentheses very good on this page. background on this page could be a bit dusty (dukkah dust) | + | * pp 18-19. frills on parentheses very good on this page. background on this page could be a bit dusty (dukkah dust) |
| - | * pp25. change amounts in recipe to relative amounts in Stuffed Gol Gappa Balls (see email) | + | * pp 49. change amounts in recipe to relative amounts in Stuffed Gol Gappa Balls (see email) |
| - | * pp31. Femke didn't want any images with her text. The drawing should go with the recipe on the next page anyway. | + | * < |
| - | * pp47. little fires: beautiful, but is it still readable? | + | * < |
| + | * pp 92-93. little fires: beautiful, but is it still readable? | ||
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