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* speaking of this, something has bothered me a little about the stylised braces. perhaps they seem somewhat too imposing. i don't know how it would work, but i wonder if reducing their opacity would be an option… or changing their colour? | * speaking of this, something has bothered me a little about the stylised braces. perhaps they seem somewhat too imposing. i don't know how it would work, but i wonder if reducing their opacity would be an option… or changing their colour? | ||
* because the the graphic behind the sourcing paragraph on (pdf) page 9 is not aligned to the text, on first glance it looked to me like the text was meant to be highlighted | * because the the graphic behind the sourcing paragraph on (pdf) page 9 is not aligned to the text, on first glance it looked to me like the text was meant to be highlighted | ||
- | * < | + | * < |
* speaking of braces, the one on (pdf) page 22 overlaps the text in an unseemly fashion! | * speaking of braces, the one on (pdf) page 22 overlaps the text in an unseemly fashion! | ||
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=== draft #26 (aka open_sauces_draft.20100425.pdf) === | === draft #26 (aka open_sauces_draft.20100425.pdf) === | ||
- | * pp7. taste of brussels. if possible this page should look a bit archaic, with images from old herbaria and/or beer ads (see email for examples) | + | * pp 12-13. taste of brussels. if possible this page should look a bit archaic, with images from old herbaria and/or beer ads (see email for examples) |
- | * pp10. frills on parentheses very good on this page. background on this page could be a bit dusty (dukkah dust) | + | * pp 18-19. frills on parentheses very good on this page. background on this page could be a bit dusty (dukkah dust) |
- | * pp25. change amounts in recipe to relative amounts in Stuffed Gol Gappa Balls (see email) | + | * pp 49. change amounts in recipe to relative amounts in Stuffed Gol Gappa Balls (see email) |
- | * pp31. Femke didn't want any images with her text. The drawing should go with the recipe on the next page anyway. | + | * < |
- | * pp47. little fires: beautiful, but is it still readable? | + | * < |
+ | * pp 92-93. little fires: beautiful, but is it still readable? | ||