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   * <del>pp 61. Remove subhead 'Notes' and set as notes for consistency with other articles (eg. pp41, pp86-87)</del>   * <del>pp 61. Remove subhead 'Notes' and set as notes for consistency with other articles (eg. pp41, pp86-87)</del>
   * <del>pp 55. include author name beneath title.</del>   * <del>pp 55. include author name beneath title.</del>
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 +=== draft #25 (aka open_sauces.draft.20100422.pdf) ===
 +  * changes to ingredients layout. check that amounts and names are consistent with earlier versions
 +  * pp76. recipe layout/formatting
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 +=== draft #26 (aka open_sauces_draft.20100425.pdf) ===
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 +  * pp 12-13. taste of brussels. if possible this page should look a bit archaic, with images from old herbaria and/or beer ads (see email for examples)
 +  * pp 18-19. frills on parentheses very good on this page. background on this page could be a bit dusty (dukkah dust)
 +  * <del>pp 49. change amounts in recipe to relative amounts in Stuffed Gol Gappa Balls (see email)</del>
 +  * <del>pp 60-61. Femke didn't want any images with her text. The drawing should go with the recipe on the next page anyway.</del>
 +  * <del>pp 60-61. needs page number</del>
 +  * pp 92-93. little fires: beautiful, but is it still readable? -- still "needs work"
 +  * <del>p 83 change "ginger soup" heading font</del>
 +  * <del>p 87 footnote indicators in text **come after all other punctuation.** so ~</del>
 +    * <del>"…events like the Flemish Primitives<sup>2</sup>."  --> "…Primitives**.<sup>2</sup>**"</del>
 +    * <del>"(GC-MS)<sup>1</sup>." in this case i would put the number inside the brackets "(GC-MS <sup>1</sup>)." to make clear that it refers to the abbreviation and not the sentence as a whole.</del>
 +  * <del>"golgappa" or "Gol Gappa"</del>  i've used "Gol Gappa" but it looks like either is ok. (see: http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Panipuri)
 +  * <del>pp 81-3 the bolded "why" repeated in each section here looks a bit weird to me.</del> now opens with **"This dessert"**
 +  * <del>why is only one side of the spreads numbered?</del> both facing pages should be numbered except on graphic only spreads.
 +  * i like the idea of the formatting of the ingredients sections, but somehow the combination of ingredients with and without preceding quantities looks confusing to me… especially where one ingredient listing spills over into multiple lines. -- please add details/suggestions/examples 
  
 === still waiting... === === still waiting... ===
   * check all logos   * check all logos
-  * check E numbers+  * check E numbers (either wikipedia or 'de essenties' for reference)
   * check chemical notation   * check chemical notation
 +    * only one or two of these have ended up in the publication, no? the one i found looked alright.
   * check footnotes   * check footnotes
   * check IPA for 'stump' and/or 'stampot'   * check IPA for 'stump' and/or 'stampot'
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   * check urls for accurcy & consistency   * check urls for accurcy & consistency
   * check footnote consistency   * check footnote consistency
- +    * the few footnotes there are now look fine. maybe consider using a numeral in sneha's (even though there's just the one footnote) to keep it consistent with bernard's article. 
-=== misc === +  * check libarynth -> opensauces.cc urls
-poking my nose where it shouldn't be, but… +
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-  * i like the green chevrons, but i wonder if they work with the existing devices and designs +
-  * speaking of this, something has bothered me a little about the stylised braces. perhaps they seem somewhat too imposing. i don't know how it would work, but i wonder if reducing their opacity would be an option… or changing their colour? +
-  * because the the graphic behind the sourcing paragraph on (pdf) page 9 is not aligned to the text, on first glance it looked to me like the text was meant to be highlighted +
-  * <del>speaking of chevrons: even though in bernard's article they are 'references' and not 'links', they are serving the same function so why not put the little blue chevrons next to them like everywhere else?<del>done. +
-  * speaking of braces, the one on (pdf) page 22 overlaps the text in an unseemly fashion! +
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-=== draft #25 (aka open_sauces.draft.20100422.pdf) === +
-  * changes to ingredients layout. check that amounts and names are consistent with earlier versions +
-  * pp76. recipe layout/formatting +
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-=== draft #26 (aka open_sauces_draft.20100425.pdf) === +
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-  * pp7. taste of brussels. if possible this page should look a bit archaic, with images from old herbaria and/or beer ads (see email for examples) +
-  * pp10. frills on parentheses very good on this page. background on this page could be a bit dusty (dukkah dust) +
-  * pp25. change amounts in recipe to relative amounts in Stuffed Gol Gappa Balls (see email) +
-  * pp31. Femke didn't want any images with her text. The drawing should go with the recipe on the next page anyway. +
-  * pp47. little fires: beautiful, but is it still readable? +
  
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