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- | === open sauces tasks/ | + | ==== open sauces tasks/ |
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- | === draft #1 -> #14 === | + | ==== errata |
- | * compressed into draft #16 | + | * page 89 "15ml tablesppons |
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- | === draft #18 (aka open_sauces.draft.20100413.pdf) === | + | |
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- | === still waiting... | + | |
- | * check all logos | + | |
- | * check E numbers | + | |
- | * check chemical notation | + | |
- | * check footnotes | + | |
- | * check IPA for ' | + | |
- | * check capitalisation & italic | + | |
- | * i think i checked this, so it should | + | |
- | * map for feral trade coffee -> double gold recipe | + | |
- | * check chinese in ginger soup recipe | + | |
- | * well, as i mentioned by email a while ago, there is nothing in the characters that suggests they // | + | |
- | * check urls for accurcy & consistency | + | |
- | * check footnote consistency | + | |
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- | === misc === | + | |
- | poking my nose where it shouldn' | + | |
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- | * i like the green chevrons, but i wonder if they work with the existing devices and designs | + | |
- | * speaking of this, something has bothered me a little about the stylised braces. perhaps they seem somewhat too imposing. i don't know how it would work, but i wonder if reducing their opacity would be an option… or changing their colour? | + | |
- | * because the the graphic behind the sourcing paragraph on (pdf) page 9 is not aligned to the text, on first glance it looked to me like the text was meant to be highlighted | + | |
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- | * speaking of braces, the one on (pdf) page 22 overlaps the text in an unseemly fashion! | + | |
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- | === draft #25 (aka open_sauces.draft.20100422.pdf) === | + | |
- | * changes to ingredients layout. check that amounts and names are consistent with earlier versions | + | |
- | * pp76. recipe layout/ | + | |
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- | === draft #26 (aka open_sauces_draft.20100425.pdf) === | + | |
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- | * pp7. taste of brussels. if possible this page should look a bit archaic, with images from old herbaria and/or beer ads (see email for examples) | + | |
- | * pp10. frills on parentheses very good on this page. background on this page could be a bit dusty (dukkah dust) | + | |
- | * pp25. change amounts in recipe to relative amounts in Stuffed Gol Gappa Balls (see email) | + | |
- | * pp31. Femke didn't want any images with her text. The drawing should go with the recipe on the next page anyway. | + | |
- | * pp47. little fires: beautiful, but is it still readable? | + | |