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| * check urls for accurcy & consistency | * check urls for accurcy & consistency | ||
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| - | * i like the green chevrons, but i wonder if they work with the existing devices and designs | ||
| - | * speaking of this, something has bothered me a little about the stylised braces. perhaps they seem somewhat too imposing. i don't know how it would work, but i wonder if reducing their opacity would be an option… or changing their colour? | ||
| - | * because the the graphic behind the sourcing paragraph on (pdf) page 9 is not aligned to the text, on first glance it looked to me like the text was meant to be highlighted | ||
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| - | * speaking of braces, the one on (pdf) page 22 overlaps the text in an unseemly fashion! | ||
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| * pp 92-93. little fires: beautiful, but is it still readable? -- still "needs work" | * pp 92-93. little fires: beautiful, but is it still readable? -- still "needs work" | ||
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| + | * i like the idea of the formatting of the ingredients sections, but somehow the combination of ingredients with and without preceding quantities looks confusing to me… especially where one ingredient listing spills over into multiple lines. -- please add details/ | ||
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