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--- open_sauces_errata [2010-04-27 03:48] – 203.26.122.12
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   * pp 12-13. taste of brussels. if possible this page should look a bit archaic, with images from old herbaria and/or beer ads (see email for examples)
   * pp 18-19. frills on parentheses very good on this page. background on this page could be a bit dusty (dukkah dust)
-  * pp 49. change amounts in recipe to relative amounts in Stuffed Gol Gappa Balls (see email)
+  * <del>pp 49. change amounts in recipe to relative amounts in Stuffed Gol Gappa Balls (see email)</del>
   * <del>pp 60-61. Femke didn't want any images with her text. The drawing should go with the recipe on the next page anyway.</del>
   * <del>pp 60-61. needs page number</del>
   * pp 92-93. little fires: beautiful, but is it still readable? -- still "needs work"
+  * <del>p 83 change "ginger soup" heading font</del>
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+  * <del>p 87 footnote indicators in text **come after all other punctuation.** so ~</del>
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+    * <del>"…events like the Flemish Primitives<sup>2</sup>."  --> "…Primitives**.<sup>2</sup>**"</del>
+    * <del>"(GC-MS)<sup>1</sup>." in this case i would put the number inside the brackets "(GC-MS <sup>1</sup>)." to make clear that it refers to the abbreviation and not the sentence as a whole.</del>
-  <del>* p 83 change "ginger soup" heading font</del>
+  * <del>"golgappa" or "Gol Gappa"</del>  i've used "Gol Gappa" but it looks like either is ok. (see: http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Panipuri)
-  * p 87 footnote indicators in text **//come after all other punctuation.//** so ~
+  * <del>pp 81-3 the bolded "why" repeated in each section here looks a bit weird to me.</del> now opens with **"This dessert"**
-    * "…events like the Flemish Primitives<sup>2</sup>."  --> "…Primitives**.<sup>2</sup>**"
+  * <del>why is only one side of the spreads numbered?</del> both facing pages should be numbered except on graphic only spreads.
-    * "(GC-MS)<sup>1</sup>." in this case i would put the number inside the brackets "(GC-MS <sup>1</sup>)." to make clear that it refers to the abbreviation and not the sentence as a whole.
+  * i like the idea of the formatting of the ingredients sections, but somehow the combination of ingredients with and without preceding quantities looks confusing to me… especially where one ingredient listing spills over into multiple lines. -- please add details/suggestions/examples
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-  * pp 81-3 the bolded "why" repeated in each section here looks a bit weird to me.
-  * why is only one side of the spreads numbered?
-  * i like the idea of the formatting of the ingredients sections, but somehow the combination of ingredients with and without preceding quantities looks confusing to me… especially where one ingredient listing spills over into multiple lines.