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   * <del>pp 60-61. needs page number</del>   * <del>pp 60-61. needs page number</del>
   * pp 92-93. little fires: beautiful, but is it still readable? -- still "needs work"   * pp 92-93. little fires: beautiful, but is it still readable? -- still "needs work"
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   * <del>p 83 change "ginger soup" heading font</del>   * <del>p 83 change "ginger soup" heading font</del>
   * p 87 footnote indicators in text **//come after all other punctuation.//** so ~   * p 87 footnote indicators in text **//come after all other punctuation.//** so ~
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     * "(GC-MS)<sup>1</sup>." in this case i would put the number inside the brackets "(GC-MS <sup>1</sup>)." to make clear that it refers to the abbreviation and not the sentence as a whole.     * "(GC-MS)<sup>1</sup>." in this case i would put the number inside the brackets "(GC-MS <sup>1</sup>)." to make clear that it refers to the abbreviation and not the sentence as a whole.
   * "golgappa" or "Gol Gappa"?   * "golgappa" or "Gol Gappa"?
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   * pp 81-3 the bolded "why" repeated in each section here looks a bit weird to me.   * pp 81-3 the bolded "why" repeated in each section here looks a bit weird to me.
   * why is only one side of the spreads numbered?   * why is only one side of the spreads numbered?
   * i like the idea of the formatting of the ingredients sections, but somehow the combination of ingredients with and without preceding quantities looks confusing to me… especially where one ingredient listing spills over into multiple lines.   * i like the idea of the formatting of the ingredients sections, but somehow the combination of ingredients with and without preceding quantities looks confusing to me… especially where one ingredient listing spills over into multiple lines.
  
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