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* i like the idea of the formatting of the ingredients sections, but somehow the combination of ingredients with and without preceding quantities looks confusing to me… especially where one ingredient listing spills over into multiple lines. -- please add details/ | * i like the idea of the formatting of the ingredients sections, but somehow the combination of ingredients with and without preceding quantities looks confusing to me… especially where one ingredient listing spills over into multiple lines. -- please add details/ | ||
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+ | === draft #31 === | ||
+ | * document-wide | ||
+ | * decide upon //au bain-marie// | ||
+ | * < | ||
+ | * p 7 | ||
+ | * < | ||
+ | * Rasa' -> Rasa's | ||
+ | * Pieter' | ||
+ | * & -> and | ||
+ | * heading "Note to the readers on how to get involved" | ||
+ | * p 18 | ||
+ | * correct the leading for " | ||
+ | * p 25 | ||
+ | * consider reflowing to avoid the two-line widow in paragraph 3? | ||
+ | * p 28 | ||
+ | * 1cm -> 1 cm | ||
+ | * p 41 | ||
+ | * contuined -> continued | ||
+ | * pp 42-43 | ||
+ | * spacing here still seems off to me | ||
+ | * p 47 | ||
+ | * a hyphen here needs to be replaced with an en | ||
+ | * p 49 | ||
+ | * make formatting of " | ||
+ | * in the sourcing section there is a mini-recipe for harissa. consider setting this in "note style" | ||
+ | * p 56 | ||
+ | * Pea and Mint Ice Cream recipe: "1 tablespoon" | ||
+ | * p 61 | ||
+ | * remove full stop from "The Practice of Everyday Life." | ||
+ | * p 74 | ||
+ | * quote attribution line has jumped into the next column! | ||
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+ | * i just noticed… the coloured tabs at page corners have no bleed. i don't know if this is intentional or not, but nor do i know why you // | ||
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+ | * also don't forget to make the text more legible in the " | ||
=== still waiting... === | === still waiting... === | ||
* check all logos | * check all logos | ||
- | * check E numbers | + | * check E numbers |
* check chemical notation | * check chemical notation | ||
+ | * only one or two of these have ended up in the publication, | ||
* check footnotes | * check footnotes | ||
* check IPA for ' | * check IPA for ' | ||
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* check urls for accurcy & consistency | * check urls for accurcy & consistency | ||
* check footnote consistency | * check footnote consistency | ||
+ | * the few footnotes there are now look fine. maybe consider using a numeral in sneha' | ||
* check libarynth -> opensauces.cc urls | * check libarynth -> opensauces.cc urls | ||