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=== draft #31 === | === draft #31 === | ||
- | * document-wide | + | * document-wide. <del>//au bain marie// |
- | * decide upon //au bain-marie// | + | * <del>pp 4-7: throughout this section, change hyphens to en dashes where appropriate</ |
- | * <strike>pp 4-7: throughout this section, change hyphens to en dashes where appropriate</ | + | * p 7. <del>change dots ... to elipses … (but best do a document-wide find and replace for these)</del> |
- | * p 7 | + | * <del>Rasa' -> Rasa' |
- | * <strike>change dots ... to elipses … (but best do a document-wide find and replace for these)</strike> | + | * <del>Pieter' |
- | * Rasa' -> Rasa' | + | * <del>& -> and -></ |
- | * Pieter' | + | |
- | * & -> and | + | |
* heading "Note to the readers on how to get involved" | * heading "Note to the readers on how to get involved" | ||
- | * p 18 | + | * p 18. <del>correct |
- | * correct | + | * p 25. consider reflowing to avoid the two-line widow in paragraph 3? |
- | * p 25 | + | * p 28. <del>1cm -> 1 cm</ |
- | * consider reflowing to avoid the two-line widow in paragraph 3? | + | * p 41. <del>contuined -> continued</ |
- | * p 28 | + | * pp 42-43. spacing here still seems off to me |
- | * 1cm -> 1 cm | + | * p 47. <del>a hyphen here needs to be replaced with an en</ |
- | * p 41 | + | * p 49. <del>make formatting of " |
- | * contuined -> continued | + | * <del>in the sourcing section there is a mini-recipe for harissa. consider setting this in "note style"</ |
- | * pp 42-43 | + | * p 56. <del>Pea and Mint Ice Cream recipe: "1 tablespoon" |
- | * spacing here still seems off to me | + | * p 61. <del>remove full stop from "The Practice of Everyday Life."</ |
- | * p 47 | + | * p 74. <del>quote attribution line has jumped into the next column!</ |
- | * a hyphen here needs to be replaced with an en | + | |
- | * p 49 | + | |
- | * make formatting of " | + | |
- | * in the sourcing section there is a mini-recipe for harissa. consider setting this in "note style" | + | |
- | * p 56 | + | |
- | * Pea and Mint Ice Cream recipe: "1 tablespoon" | + | |
- | * p 61 | + | |
- | * remove full stop from "The Practice of Everyday Life." | + | |
- | * p 74 | + | |
- | * quote attribution line has jumped into the next column! | + | |
- | * i just noticed… the coloured tabs at page corners have no bleed. i don't know if this is intentional or not, but nor do i know why you // | + | * i just noticed… the coloured tabs at page corners have no bleed. i don't know if this is intentional or not, but nor do i know why you // |
* also don't forget to make the text more legible in the " | * also don't forget to make the text more legible in the " | ||
+ | |||
+ | === draft #37 (aka the big final reference shindig) === | ||
+ | some quotes still don't have full reference data attached, but in these few cases i think we can get away with it (and in any case no data was supplied by the authors). | ||
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+ | the references not corrected below can be left as they are. | ||
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+ | * p 18. Jean-Paul Bruneteau, _Tukka: Real Australian Food_ (New Holland Publishers, 1996) | ||
+ | * p 23. William Longgood, _The Queen Must Die and Other Affairs of Bees and Men_ (W.W. Norton & Co, 1988) | ||
+ | * Hubert Guerriat, _Etre Performant et Apiculture_ (Rucher du tilleul Editions, 1996) | ||
+ | * p 42. Harold McGee, _On Food and Cooking_ (Hodder & Stoughton, 2004) | ||
+ | * p 56. [can maja supply the citation data in the right format here, since presumably it was her who quoted this obscure and esoteric dutch text ;)] | ||
+ | * p 61. H.M.S.J. [this massive and pompous acronym is kind of weird and archaic and so i think it should be left here] De Hol, _Ik kan koken: Geillustreerd handboek voor allen die willen leeren koken_ (Sijthof uitgeverij, 1931) | ||
+ | * Isabelle Beeton, _The Book of Household Management, 1836_ (http:// | ||
+ | * Allen Downey, Jeffrey Elkner and Chris Meyers, _How to Think Like a Computer Scientist_ (Green Tea Press, 2002) | ||
+ | * Frederick P. Brooks, _The Mythical Man-Month: Essays on Software Engineering_ (Addison-Wesley, | ||
+ | * Henri Lefevbre, _Rhythmanalysis: | ||
+ | * Luce Giard, Michel de Certeau and Pierre Mayol, _The Practice of Everyday Life: Living and Cooking_ (University of Minnesota Press, 1998) | ||
+ | * Open Source Publishing: http:// | ||
=== still waiting... === | === still waiting... === | ||
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* check footnote consistency | * check footnote consistency | ||
* the few footnotes there are now look fine. maybe consider using a numeral in sneha' | * the few footnotes there are now look fine. maybe consider using a numeral in sneha' | ||
- | * check libarynth -> opensauces.cc urls | + | * check libarynth |
+ | * quote references. eg. " | ||