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| open_sauces_errata [2010-07-07 13:09] – 83.101.5.51 | open_sauces_errata [2010-07-07 13:45] – <del>fixed</del> some things nik | ||
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| * p 7 | * p 7 | ||
| * < | * < | ||
| - | * Rasa' -> Rasa' | + | * <del>Rasa' -> Rasa' |
| - | * Pieter' | + | * <del>Pieter' |
| - | * & -> and | + | * <del>& -> and -></ |
| * heading "Note to the readers on how to get involved" | * heading "Note to the readers on how to get involved" | ||
| - | * p 18 | + | * p 18. correct |
| - | * correct | + | |
| * p 25 | * p 25 | ||
| * consider reflowing to avoid the two-line widow in paragraph 3? | * consider reflowing to avoid the two-line widow in paragraph 3? | ||
| - | * p 28 | + | * p 28. <del>1cm -> 1 cm</ |
| - | * 1cm -> 1 cm | + | * p 41. <del>contuined -> continued</ |
| - | * p 41 | + | |
| - | * contuined -> continued | + | |
| * pp 42-43 | * pp 42-43 | ||
| * spacing here still seems off to me | * spacing here still seems off to me | ||
| - | * p 47 | + | * p 47. <del>a hyphen here needs to be replaced with an en</ |
| - | * a hyphen here needs to be replaced with an en | + | |
| * p 49 | * p 49 | ||
| - | * make formatting of " | + | * <del>make formatting of " |
| - | * in the sourcing section there is a mini-recipe for harissa. consider setting this in "note style" | + | * <del>in the sourcing section there is a mini-recipe for harissa. consider setting this in "note style"</ |
| * p 56 | * p 56 | ||
| - | * Pea and Mint Ice Cream recipe: "1 tablespoon" | + | * <del>Pea and Mint Ice Cream recipe: "1 tablespoon" |
| * p 61 | * p 61 | ||
| - | * remove full stop from "The Practice of Everyday Life." | + | * <del>remove full stop from "The Practice of Everyday Life."</ |
| * p 74 | * p 74 | ||
| - | * quote attribution line has jumped into the next column! | + | * <del>quote attribution line has jumped into the next column!</ |
| - | * i just noticed… the coloured tabs at page corners have no bleed. i don't know if this is intentional or not, but nor do i know why you // | + | * i just noticed… the coloured tabs at page corners have no bleed. i don't know if this is intentional or not, but nor do i know why you // |
| * also don't forget to make the text more legible in the " | * also don't forget to make the text more legible in the " | ||
| Line 84: | Line 80: | ||
| * check footnote consistency | * check footnote consistency | ||
| * the few footnotes there are now look fine. maybe consider using a numeral in sneha' | * the few footnotes there are now look fine. maybe consider using a numeral in sneha' | ||
| - | * check libarynth -> opensauces.cc urls | + | * check libarynth |
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