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| open_sauces_errata [2010-07-07 13:45] – <del>fixed</del> some things nik | open_sauces_errata [2010-07-07 14:06] – 83.101.5.51 |
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| * decide upon //au bain-marie// or //au bain marie// | * decide upon //au bain-marie// or //au bain marie// |
| * <del>pp 4-7: throughout this section, change hyphens to en dashes where appropriate</del> | * <del>pp 4-7: throughout this section, change hyphens to en dashes where appropriate</del> |
| * p 7 | * p 7. <del>change dots ... to elipses … (but best do a document-wide find and replace for these)</del> |
| * <del>change dots ... to elipses … (but best do a document-wide find and replace for these)</del> | |
| * <del>Rasa' -> Rasa's </del> | * <del>Rasa' -> Rasa's </del> |
| * <del>Pieter' -> Pieter's </del> | * <del>Pieter' -> Pieter's </del> |
| * <del>& -> and -></del> "Danica and Nika Kuzmanovic, and Vera Miler" | * <del>& -> and -></del> "Danica and Nika Kuzmanovic, and Vera Miler" |
| * heading "Note to the readers on how to get involved" could be rephrased either as "Note to readers […]" or "Note to the reader […]" | * heading "Note to the readers on how to get involved" could be rephrased either as "Note to readers […]" or "Note to the reader […]" |
| * p 18. correct table formatting for "Dukkah Dust" recipe ingredients | * p 18. <del>correct table formatting for "Dukkah Dust" recipe ingredients</del> |
| * p 25 | * p 25. consider reflowing to avoid the two-line widow in paragraph 3? |
| * consider reflowing to avoid the two-line widow in paragraph 3? | |
| * p 28. <del>1cm -> 1 cm</del> | * p 28. <del>1cm -> 1 cm</del> |
| * p 41. <del>contuined -> continued</del> | * p 41. <del>contuined -> continued</del> |
| * pp 42-43 | * pp 42-43. spacing here still seems off to me |
| * spacing here still seems off to me | |
| * p 47. <del>a hyphen here needs to be replaced with an en</del> | * p 47. <del>a hyphen here needs to be replaced with an en</del> |
| * p 49 | * p 49. <del>make formatting of "Stuffed Gol Gappa Balls" ingredients section consistent (i.e. lowercase after ingredient quantities)</del> |
| * <del>make formatting of "Stuffed Gol Gappa Balls" ingredients section consistent (i.e. lowercase after ingredient quantities)</del> | |
| * <del>in the sourcing section there is a mini-recipe for harissa. consider setting this in "note style"</del> | * <del>in the sourcing section there is a mini-recipe for harissa. consider setting this in "note style"</del> |
| * p 56 | * p 56. <del>Pea and Mint Ice Cream recipe: "1 tablespoon" isn't sitting in the quantities tab as it should</del> |
| * <del>Pea and Mint Ice Cream recipe: "1 tablespoon" isn't sitting in the quantities tab as it should</del> | * p 61. <del>remove full stop from "The Practice of Everyday Life."</del> |
| * p 61 | * p 74. <del>quote attribution line has jumped into the next column!</del> |
| * <del>remove full stop from "The Practice of Everyday Life."</del> | |
| * p 74 | |
| * <del>quote attribution line has jumped into the next column!</del> | |
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| * i just noticed… the coloured tabs at page corners have no bleed. i don't know if this is intentional or not, but nor do i know why you //wouldn't// want bleed here, given their positioning. -- not sure if i'll keep these anyway (nik) | * i just noticed… the coloured tabs at page corners have no bleed. i don't know if this is intentional or not, but nor do i know why you //wouldn't// want bleed here, given their positioning. (alkan) -- not sure if i'll keep these anyway (nik) |
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| * also don't forget to make the text more legible in the "little fires" spread (and in some other places) as maja mentioned a while ago. | * also don't forget to make the text more legible in the "little fires" spread (and in some other places) as maja mentioned a while ago. |
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