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=== draft #31 === | === draft #31 === | ||
- | * document-wide | + | * document-wide. <del>//au bain marie// |
- | * decide upon //au bain-marie// | + | |
* < | * < | ||
- | * p 7 | + | * p 7. < |
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* heading "Note to the readers on how to get involved" | * heading "Note to the readers on how to get involved" | ||
- | * p 18. correct table formatting for " | + | * p 18. <del>correct table formatting for " |
- | * p 25 | + | * p 25. consider reflowing to avoid the two-line widow in paragraph 3? |
- | * consider reflowing to avoid the two-line widow in paragraph 3? | + | |
* p 28. < | * p 28. < | ||
* p 41. < | * p 41. < | ||
- | * pp 42-43 | + | * pp 42-43. spacing here still seems off to me |
- | * spacing here still seems off to me | + | |
* p 47. < | * p 47. < | ||
- | * p 49 | + | * p 49. < |
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* < | * < | ||
- | * p 56 | + | * p 56. < |
- | * < | + | * p 61. < |
- | * p 61 | + | * p 74. < |
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- | * p 74 | + | |
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- | * i just noticed… the coloured tabs at page corners have no bleed. i don't know if this is intentional or not, but nor do i know why you // | + | * i just noticed… the coloured tabs at page corners have no bleed. i don't know if this is intentional or not, but nor do i know why you // |
* also don't forget to make the text more legible in the " | * also don't forget to make the text more legible in the " | ||
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+ | === draft #37 (aka the big final reference shindig) === | ||
+ | some quotes still don't have full reference data attached, but in these few cases i think we can get away with it (and in any case no data was supplied by the authors). | ||
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+ | the references not corrected below can be left as they are. | ||
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+ | * p 56. [can maja supply the citation data in the right format here, since presumably it was her who quoted this obscure and esoteric dutch text ;)] | ||
+ | * p 61. H.M.S.J. [this massive and pompous acronym is kind of weird and archaic and so i think it should be left here] De Hol, _Ik kan koken: Geillustreerd handboek voor allen die willen leeren koken_ (Sijthof uitgeverij, 1931) | ||
+ | * Isabelle Beeton, _The Book of Household Management, 1836_ (http:// | ||
+ | * Allen Downey, Jeffrey Elkner and Chris Meyers, _How to Think Like a Computer Scientist_ (Green Tea Press, 2002) | ||
+ | * Frederick P. Brooks, _The Mythical Man-Month: Essays on Software Engineering_ (Addison-Wesley, | ||
+ | * Henri Lefevbre, _Rhythmanalysis: | ||
+ | * Luce Giard, Michel de Certeau and Pierre Mayol, _The Practice of Everyday Life: Living and Cooking_ (University of Minnesota Press, 1998) | ||
+ | * Open Source Publishing: http:// | ||
=== still waiting... === | === still waiting... === | ||
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* the few footnotes there are now look fine. maybe consider using a numeral in sneha' | * the few footnotes there are now look fine. maybe consider using a numeral in sneha' | ||
* check libarynth and foam -> opensauces.cc urls | * check libarynth and foam -> opensauces.cc urls | ||
+ | * quote references. eg. " | ||
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