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open_sauces_errata [2010-07-07 13:49] 83.101.5.51open_sauces_errata [2010-07-07 14:19] nik
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 === draft #31 === === draft #31 ===
-  * document-wide +  * document-wide. <del>//au bain marie// -> //au bain-marie//</del>
-    * decide upon //au bain-marie// or //au bain marie//+
   * <del>pp 4-7: throughout this section, change hyphens to en dashes where appropriate</del>   * <del>pp 4-7: throughout this section, change hyphens to en dashes where appropriate</del>
   * p 7. <del>change dots ... to elipses … (but best do a document-wide find and replace for these)</del>   * p 7. <del>change dots ... to elipses … (but best do a document-wide find and replace for these)</del>
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     * <del>& -> and -></del> "Danica and Nika Kuzmanovic, and Vera Miler"     * <del>& -> and -></del> "Danica and Nika Kuzmanovic, and Vera Miler"
     * heading "Note to the readers on how to get involved" could be rephrased either as "Note to readers […]" or "Note to the reader […]"     * heading "Note to the readers on how to get involved" could be rephrased either as "Note to readers […]" or "Note to the reader […]"
-  * p 18. correct table formatting for "Dukkah Dust" recipe ingredients+  * p 18. <del>correct table formatting for "Dukkah Dust" recipe ingredients</del>
   * p 25. consider reflowing to avoid the two-line widow in paragraph 3?   * p 25. consider reflowing to avoid the two-line widow in paragraph 3?
   * p 28. <del>1cm -> 1 cm</del>   * p 28. <del>1cm -> 1 cm</del>
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