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| === draft #31 === | === draft #31 === | ||
| - | * document-wide | + | * document-wide. <del>//au bain marie// |
| - | * decide upon //au bain-marie// | + | * pp 4-7 <del>throughout this section, change hyphens to en dashes where appropriate</ |
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| * p 7. < | * p 7. < | ||
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| * also don't forget to make the text more legible in the " | * also don't forget to make the text more legible in the " | ||
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| + | === draft #37 (aka the big final reference shindig) === | ||
| + | some quotes still don't have full reference data attached, but in these few cases i think we can get away with it (and in any case no data was supplied by the authors). | ||
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| + | the references not corrected below can be left as they are. | ||
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| + | * p 18. < | ||
| + | * p 23. < | ||
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| + | * p 42. < | ||
| + | * p 56. [can maja supply the citation data] i've used: F. Adria, J. Soler, A. Adria, _El Bulli 2003-2004_ (Ecco, 2006) | ||
| + | * p 61. < | ||
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| + | === draft #41 === | ||
| + | * p 10. **Q.** is it ok for an ellipsis (for quotation elision) to follow a fullstop? i.e. "human sex hormones. … From the Middle Ages" | ||
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| + | === Author' | ||
| + | * p 34. replace period with comma after "The Big Fat Duck Cookbook" | ||
| + | * p 53. bulleted list is wonky | ||
| + | * p 87. references: replace hyphens with colons for consistency | ||
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| + | * are you going to keep the blue highlighting for the urls? it looks kind of full-on to me. also, urls listed as references/ | ||
| + | * by the way, why don't you bite the bullet and just give the sourcing sections ragged margins??? just look at the paragraphs on p. 11 (also 37, etc.) :-/ | ||
| === still waiting... === | === still waiting... === | ||
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| * the few footnotes there are now look fine. maybe consider using a numeral in sneha' | * the few footnotes there are now look fine. maybe consider using a numeral in sneha' | ||
| * check libarynth and foam -> opensauces.cc urls | * check libarynth and foam -> opensauces.cc urls | ||
| + | * quote references. eg. " | ||
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