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--- open_sauces_errata [2010-07-20 11:37] – nik
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 === draft #31 ===
   * document-wide. <del>//au bain marie// -> //au bain-marie//</del>
-  * <del>pp 4-7: throughout this section, change hyphens to en dashes where appropriate</del>
+  * pp 4-7 <del>throughout this section, change hyphens to en dashes where appropriate</del>
   * p 7. <del>change dots ... to elipses … (but best do a document-wide find and replace for these)</del>
     * <del>Rasa' -> Rasa's </del>
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 the references not corrected below can be left as they are.
-  * <del>p 18. Jean-Paul Bruneteau, _Tukka: Real Australian Food_ (New Holland Publishers, 1996)</del>
+  * p 18. <del>Jean-Paul Bruneteau, _Tukka: Real Australian Food_ (New Holland Publishers, 1996)</del>
-  * <del>p 23. William Longgood, _The Queen Must Die and Other Affairs of Bees and Men_ (W.W. Norton & Co, 1988)</del>
+  * p 23. <del>William Longgood, _The Queen Must Die and Other Affairs of Bees and Men_ (W.W. Norton & Co, 1988)</del>
     * <del>Hubert Guerriat, _Etre Performant et Apiculture_ (Rucher du tilleul Editions, 1996)</del>
     * <del>Jürgen Tautz, _Phänomen Honigbiene_ (Spektrum Akademischer Verlag, 2007)</del>
-  * <del>p 42. Harold McGee, _On Food and Cooking_ (Hodder & Stoughton, 2004)</del>
+  * p 42. <del>Harold McGee, _On Food and Cooking_ (Hodder & Stoughton, 2004)</del>
-  * p 56. [can maja supply the citation data in the right format here, since presumably it was her who quoted this obscure and esoteric dutch text ;)]
+  * p 56. [can maja supply the citation data] i've used: F. Adria, J. Soler, A. Adria, _El Bulli 2003-2004_ (Ecco, 2006)
-  * p 61. H.M.S.J. [this massive and pompous acronym is kind of weird and archaic and so i think it should be left here] De Hol, _Ik kan koken: Geillustreerd handboek voor allen die willen leeren koken_ (Sijthof uitgeverij, 1931)
+  * p 61. <del>H.M.S.J. [this massive and pompous acronym is kind of weird and archaic and so i think it should be left here] De Hol, _Ik kan koken: Geillustreerd handboek voor allen die willen leeren koken_ (Sijthof uitgeverij, 1931)</del>
-    * Isabelle Beeton, _The Book of Household Management, 1836_ (http://www.gutenberg.org/etext/10136)
+    * <del>Isabelle Beeton, _The Book of Household Management, 1836_ (http://www.gutenberg.org/etext/10136)</del>
-    * Allen Downey, Jeffrey Elkner and Chris Meyers, _How to Think Like a Computer Scientist_ (Green Tea Press, 2002)
+    * <del>Allen Downey, Jeffrey Elkner and Chris Meyers, _How to Think Like a Computer Scientist_ (Green Tea Press, 2002)</del>
-    * Frederick P. Brooks, _The Mythical Man-Month: Essays on Software Engineering_ (Addison-Wesley, 1995)
+    * <del>Frederick P. Brooks, _The Mythical Man-Month: Essays on Software Engineering_ (Addison-Wesley, 1995)</del>
-    * Henri Lefevbre, _Rhythmanalysis: Space, Time and Everyday Life_ (Translated by Stuart Elden and Gerald Moore, Continuum, 2004)
+    * <del>Henri Lefevbre, _Rhythmanalysis: Space, Time and Everyday Life_ (Translated by Stuart Elden and Gerald Moore, Continuum, 2004)</del>
-    * Luce Giard, Michel de Certeau and Pierre Mayol, _The Practice of Everyday Life: Living and Cooking_ (University of Minnesota Press, 1998)
+    * <del>Luce Giard, Michel de Certeau and Pierre Mayol, _The Practice of Everyday Life: Living and Cooking_ (University of Minnesota Press, 1998)</del>
-    * Open Source Publishing: http://ospublish.constantvzw.org
+    * <del>Open Source Publishing: http://ospublish.constantvzw.org</del>
+=== draft #41 ===
+  * p 10. **Q.** is it ok for an ellipsis (for quotation elision) to follow a fullstop? i.e. "human sex hormones. … From the Middle Ages"
+=== Author's Proof #01 ===
+  * p 34. replace period with comma after "The Big Fat Duck Cookbook"
+  * <del>p 53. bulleted list is wonky</del>
+  * p 87. references: replace hyphens with colons for consistency
+  * **Q:** are you going to keep the blue highlighting for the urls? it looks kind of full-on to me. also, urls listed as references/further reading have no special formatting, but urls in the sourcing sections do. in the "further reading" section on p. 61, the styling is kind of mixed. wouldn't this be better if made consistent, i.e. //all// urls in blue? **A:** the blue strike probably won't stay, it's there to make sure we haven't missed ny inline urls.
+  * by the way, why don't you bite the bullet and just give the sourcing sections ragged margins??? just look at the paragraphs on p. 11 (also 37, etc.) :-/ ok.ok.ok.
 === still waiting... ===