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* by the way, why don't you bite the bullet and just give the sourcing sections ragged margins??? just look at the paragraphs on p. 11 (also 37, etc.) :-/ ok.ok.ok. | * by the way, why don't you bite the bullet and just give the sourcing sections ragged margins??? just look at the paragraphs on p. 11 (also 37, etc.) :-/ ok.ok.ok. | ||
- | === Author' | + | === Author' |
* contents / recipes | * contents / recipes | ||
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* p.10: put also the wikipedia url in blue? | * p.10: put also the wikipedia url in blue? | ||
* P.14: remove ">>" | * P.14: remove ">>" | ||
- | * p.19: remove closing accolade as there is no extra line with additional info | ||
* pp.22-23: place " | * pp.22-23: place " | ||
* pp.24-25: | * pp.24-25: | ||
- | | + | * p.34-35: why not add the drawing of P31 on 34? The page now looks so empty. |
- | * pp.28-29: remove closing accolade? | + | |
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* p.36-37: and use the drawing of p 30 on p 37? A lot of emptiness as well here. Remove closing accolades on p. 36 and use a smaller one for p.37? | * p.36-37: and use the drawing of p 30 on p 37? A lot of emptiness as well here. Remove closing accolades on p. 36 and use a smaller one for p.37? | ||
* p.41: Maybe put title in bold " | * p.41: Maybe put title in bold " | ||
* p.43: put floating " | * p.43: put floating " | ||
* p.49: put floating " | * p.49: put floating " | ||
- | * p.56: remove closing accolades? | ||
* p.57: put floating " | * p.57: put floating " | ||
- | * p.69: remove closing accolades? | ||
* pp.72-73: remove the entire right column " | * pp.72-73: remove the entire right column " | ||
- | | + | * pp.86-87: remove the entire right column " |
- | * pp.76-77: remove closing accolades? | + | |
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* pp.90-91: beautiful drawings, but not sure where this refers to? | * pp.90-91: beautiful drawings, but not sure where this refers to? | ||
- | * p.93: remove closing accolades? | ||
* Sneha Solanki bio update | * Sneha Solanki bio update | ||
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+ | Some thoughts [tj]: | ||
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+ | * p.82: “I dared tasting it…” change to “I dared taste it” | ||
+ | * p.93: “Chop mint leaves very fine” change fine to finely | ||
+ | * pp. 94-95: spread 14? To add | ||
+ | * Seemed to be some other spacing issues but when I copied the text into Word, there was just one space between the words (rather than what seemed to be none or several). I can put these up if necessary. | ||
=== still waiting... === | === still waiting... === | ||
* check all logos | * check all logos |