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-=== open sauces tasks/errata/miscellanea===+==== open sauces tasks/errata/miscellanea====
  
 items marked as <del>deleted</del> have been done. items marked as <del>deleted</del> have been done.
  
-=== notes ===+==== notes ====
  
   * hypen/dash guidelines   * hypen/dash guidelines
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     * em dash for prefixing quotes "—"     * em dash for prefixing quotes "—"
  
-=== draft #1 -> #14 ===+==== draft #1 -> #14 ====
   * compressed into draft #16   * compressed into draft #16
  
-=== draft #18 (aka open_sauces.draft.20100413.pdf) ===+==== draft #18 (aka open_sauces.draft.20100413.pdf) ====
   * <del>p 61. Remove subhead 'Notes' and set as notes for consistency with other articles (eg. pp41, pp86-87)</del>   * <del>p 61. Remove subhead 'Notes' and set as notes for consistency with other articles (eg. pp41, pp86-87)</del>
   * <del>p 55. include author name beneath title.</del>   * <del>p 55. include author name beneath title.</del>
  
  
-=== draft #25 (aka open_sauces.draft.20100422.pdf) ===+==== draft #25 (aka open_sauces.draft.20100422.pdf) ====
   * changes to ingredients layout. check that amounts and names are consistent with earlier versions   * changes to ingredients layout. check that amounts and names are consistent with earlier versions
   * <del>p 76. recipe layout/formatting</del>   * <del>p 76. recipe layout/formatting</del>
  
  
-=== draft #26 (aka open_sauces_draft.20100425.pdf) ===+==== draft #26 (aka open_sauces_draft.20100425.pdf) ====
  
   * <del>pp 12-13. taste of brussels. if possible this page should look a bit archaic, with images from old herbaria and/or beer ads (see email for examples)</del>   * <del>pp 12-13. taste of brussels. if possible this page should look a bit archaic, with images from old herbaria and/or beer ads (see email for examples)</del>
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   * i like the idea of the formatting of the ingredients sections, but somehow the combination of ingredients with and without preceding quantities looks confusing to me  especially where one ingredient listing spills over into multiple lines. -- please add details/suggestions/examples    * i like the idea of the formatting of the ingredients sections, but somehow the combination of ingredients with and without preceding quantities looks confusing to me  especially where one ingredient listing spills over into multiple lines. -- please add details/suggestions/examples 
  
-=== draft #31 ===+==== draft #31 ====
   * document-wide. <del>//au bain marie// -> //au bain-marie//</del>   * document-wide. <del>//au bain marie// -> //au bain-marie//</del>
   * pp 4-7 <del>throughout this section, change hyphens to en dashes where appropriate</del>   * pp 4-7 <del>throughout this section, change hyphens to en dashes where appropriate</del>
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   * <del>also don't forget to make the text more legible in the "little fires" spread (and in some other places) as maja mentioned a while ago.</del>   * <del>also don't forget to make the text more legible in the "little fires" spread (and in some other places) as maja mentioned a while ago.</del>
  
-=== draft #37 (aka the big final reference shindig) ===+==== draft #37 (aka the big final reference shindig) ====
 some quotes still don't have full reference data attached, but in these few cases i think we can get away with it (and in any case no data was supplied by the authors). some quotes still don't have full reference data attached, but in these few cases i think we can get away with it (and in any case no data was supplied by the authors).
  
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     * <del>Open Source Publishing: http://ospublish.constantvzw.org</del>     * <del>Open Source Publishing: http://ospublish.constantvzw.org</del>
  
-=== draft #41 ===+==== draft #41 ====
   * p 10. **Q.** is it ok for an ellipsis (for quotation elision) to follow a fullstop? i.e. "human sex hormones.   From the Middle Ages"    * p 10. **Q.** is it ok for an ellipsis (for quotation elision) to follow a fullstop? i.e. "human sex hormones.   From the Middle Ages" 
  
-=== Author's Proof #01 ===+==== Author's Proof #01 ====
   * p 15. <del>remove "Result" subhead at author's request"</del>   * p 15. <del>remove "Result" subhead at author's request"</del>
   * pp14-16. <del>"FermentBrussels" -> "Ferment Brussels" inline italics</del>   * pp14-16. <del>"FermentBrussels" -> "Ferment Brussels" inline italics</del>
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   * <del>by the way, why don't you bite the bullet and just give the sourcing sections ragged margins??? just look at the paragraphs on p. 11 (also 37, etc.) :-/ ok.ok.ok.</del>   * <del>by the way, why don't you bite the bullet and just give the sourcing sections ragged margins??? just look at the paragraphs on p. 11 (also 37, etc.) :-/ ok.ok.ok.</del>
  
-=== Author's Proof #02 ===+==== Author's Proof #02 ====
  
   * contents / recipes   * contents / recipes
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   *    * 
  
-=== Author's Proof #03 ===+==== Author's Proof #03 ====
  
   * sp 3 in diversity of disciplines, 2nd paragraph, 2nd line: "considered an art (e.g. virtuoso chefs)" change to "considered an art (e.g. creations of a virtuoso chef)"   * sp 3 in diversity of disciplines, 2nd paragraph, 2nd line: "considered an art (e.g. virtuoso chefs)" change to "considered an art (e.g. creations of a virtuoso chef)"
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